I really like the angle you drew this at. Its pretty cool looking, and makes them pop right out against the background. I also love the design you have for her shirt (I want one now!)
Ooooh, nice! I love this peice of work, the way you drew them looks very fleshed out and really stands off the page; Nehema looks very depth here, epseically the shading around her bust and the way she's standing, very nice!